For this weeks writing we had to write about space.
One day I was on my computer and I was playing a space game. It was so much fun so I decided that I wanted to find out more about different planets. So I went on my computer and started to search. There was this website and it was to create your own planet. I was really interested so I clicked on it and I named it acto so after I made my planet I went to go and watch tv. When I turned on the TV I went onto the news and the people were saying that there were people in space and they came across a new planet and it looked exactly like the one I made on the website but I said “That couldn’t be MINE!” but then on the news it said the planet was called acto. I was in SHOCK! It was crazy. I couldn’t believe it. I was kind of happy they even said that the planet was made by me then a few months later I was famous.
I enjoyed doing this weeks writing because I like writing about space.
Do you like space and planets?
Great story!
ReplyDeleteYou could improve on adding commas before someone in your story!
Great description words!
-Neave
•Hi Lily•
ReplyDeleteI Love Your writing Its Cool
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Keep Up all the Good work ♡