For this weeks reading we had to write about what we wanted changed at Papakura Central School.
Papakura Central School Change.
What would you Change around the school and why?
What I would change at school is the school toilets because they are yucky and gross. How will we get the money? We could fundraise at the school. Who would do it? The people that would do it are builders that have come to our school before and that have built something here. How will they do it? They would probably start by smashing everything down and then they would start the process. When will they do it? They would do it at the start of the year most likely. I want the toilets to be clean. I bet everyone wants the toilets to be clean and I also want there to be little rooms in between each toilet. I think everyone would want their own little room in between every single toilet.
I enjoyed doing this weeks writing because I like writing about our school.
What would you change at your school?
hi lily!
ReplyDeleteI think this was a AMAZING story!!
I do think you could add a comma instead of a full stop like.. the last two sentences!
overall great!