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Monday, August 17, 2020

My Opinion Writing

Today I had to write about my opinion whether I think we should have packaging on our products or not.

I enjoyed doing this piece of writing because it is fun when I get to write about my opinion.
Do you think we should have packaging on our products or not and why? 

2 comments:

  1. Hi Lily,
    You have done some great thinking and writing about packaging.
    My opinion is yes and no.
    I think it is great to have packaging on things like Weet-Bix (but I think it should be reusable).
    But cucumbers, apples and bananas should not have packaging. People can just bring their own bags. Thanks for your great question.

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  2. Hi Lily,

    I really like the way that you have structured this blog post! I tend to agree with Mr Cossey. I think that packaging is good for some things but it isn't needed for everything. Lots of our fruit and vegetables can be carried in reusable bags to save us needing too much plastic.
    Have a go at expanding your piece of writing on a Google Document. You can use the models on the LCS Slide to help you out.

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