Hi Lily Wow I love your artist reseach on Dick Frizzell! Very cool. What a lovely story you have written this week, I like how you tried to use speech marks to show when the characters where speaking. Miss Hudson
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Hi Lily
ReplyDeleteWow I love your artist reseach on Dick Frizzell! Very cool. What a lovely story you have written this week, I like how you tried to use speech marks to show when the characters where speaking.
Miss Hudson