Hi Lily Wow cool balancing pictures. I really like how you used direct speech in your writing and you have a great story line! Well done with your maths also. Great effort this week. Miss Hudson
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Hi Lily
ReplyDeleteWow cool balancing pictures. I really like how you used direct speech in your writing and you have a great story line! Well done with your maths also.
Great effort this week.
Miss Hudson