For this weeks writing we had to draw a made up creature and then we had to describe it.
My nonsense creature is mixed with a pig,pineapple,eagle,butterfly,dragon,giraffe and a horse. My nonsense creature's name is Piney. He has a pineapple head with pineapple spikes of hair he also has dragon feet, a giraffe tail, one eagle wing and one butterfly wing. Piney also has a pig nose he also has a smiley mouth with sharp blood teeth. My nonsense creature has a dark brown moustache and he also has cute freckles. Piney also has a cape to act like he is a super creature he also has giraffe tail hands. My nonsense creature has an eye piercing. My nonsense creature walks like a robot,he lives with me in my house and he eats carrots,broccoli and kumra and he hates eating chocolate and lollies but he really likes dark chocolate. Piney's personality is like a kind creature but everyone thinks he is to kind but he just loves himself and he loves me and he is always happy.
I enjoyed doing this weeks writing because I like making up my own creatures.
If you had to make a nonsense creature what would you make it look like?
Hi Lily,
ReplyDeleteI love how you mixed your animal with a fruit as well as lots of other animals. I also love all the descriptive words you used!