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Friday, May 1, 2020

The windmill man

Today I had to make a story about the windmill man.
One day there was a man and he was lonely because he didn't have anyone with him. The man was also sad because he grew windmills and then a big storm came and broke them all. The man was pretty angry because a big storm came and the windmills that he grew broke. He was happy at the end because all of the windmills came back.

I enjoyed doing this because I like writing about windmill mans.
Do you you like writing about windmill mans?

1 comment:

  1. Hi Lily,
    This is a great start to a story. Can you think of how you would extend it further? Could there be a creative way that the windmills were all built again?

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