Animals flying from space
Once upon a time there lived lots of animals flying from space into a city called Tokyo city. there were lots and lots of buildings.The animals were called Buddy, Pepper and Ocean the animals there are is Buddy is the dog , Pepper is the hamster and Ocean is the turtle. They all were so scared especially Pepper she was even crying and her crying is very annoying because it sounds like squeaking. The problem is
Kia ora Lily my name is Livia I like the part when the animals were flying from space. did you finished the last sentence.Why do you have flower in the picture? Bey Bey
ReplyDeleteKia ora Livia I have flowers on my picture because I thought that there could be flowers in the city because it looks pretty.
DeleteHi Lily I am Olivia from Ruma Tui at Kaniere School. I like your Animals flying from space. I like the turtle the most. How long did it take you to make it? Maybe you could have used ellipses on the last sentence to get the reader to think. Great job!
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